This spread has had a slight change to make it little more conventional and make the target market to want to read on. This is a catch tag which has been taken from an interview of the character talked about in the story. 

This work has been slightly been improved with the front cover. The barcode has been edited along with the movement of the date and issue number. Also the addition of the pricing of the magazine is shown.

Final Work (Only Temporary, may be changed)

These are my products in which  I  have made a few changes in an attempt to improve them so they fit towards my target market. The changes are meant to make sure they are slightly unconventional. This will help them to stand out a lot more when on a shelf.